Monday 12 November 2012

Polished Response Writing


The quote, “Oh the horror...the horror...” said by Kurtz in Joseph Conrad’s Heart of Darkness portrays the savagery and suffering of others. Kurtz says this in the last breaths of his life with the realization of the horrible things he has done. This quote relates to Animal Farm when Benjamin, the donkey, experiences horrid events like the slaughter of the animals. To make things worse, he had to watch hopelessly as Boxer got taken away to his death in the slaughter cart. With the changing of the laws and commandments, all the animals including Benjamin didn't know right from wrong which created confusion. The enslavement of animals and humans creates an unnatural atmosphere of misconduct and corruption. Napoleon was afraid of losing power which motivated him to be even harsher.  Perhaps that is why Napoleon was so controlling and frightful, to scare the animals so they wouldn't disobey him which is madness in the making. 

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  2. Karl,
    I absolutely agree with you. I think that Benjamin went through the most pain in the story. Benjamin the donkey that never dies was one of the unlucky animals that had to watch all of their friends be tortured, starved and murdered. I think that Benjamin had a large influence on the novel.

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  3. From what I understood in your response, Benjamin the donkey suffered. But that does not compare to the meaning of the quote because Kurtz was not only talking about the horror he experienced, but also the horror he commited. The vocabulary and flow of your paragraph were great but in my opinion, the ideas did not make much sense.

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